Sunday, October 3, 2010


When we are unaware
We try to learn
When we lose hopes
We try to regain
When we gift some pain
We try to console
When we are happy
We express it whole

We try to smoothen
When life turns rough
We try and try more
We can't try enough
Life is long journey
It never stops moving
But it ceases to grow
When we stop trying


Anonymous said...

awesome poem :D
and the last 4 lines.. they say it all :D
the perfect end :)

Harshad mehta said...

So well put in words responses to different situations in life. And yes life goes on presenting new situation.

Is it not possible to respond to situation without getting involved emotionally?

Amity said...

Yes, when we stop trying, that's the time we cease to best is, as long as there is a 'thin thread of hope', let's keep trying... :)

Amazing poem Snow White! :)

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks for the prompt. I loved reading this!

bring on the cawing

Patti said...

Loved that! SO true, isn't it?! Thanks for the great prompt~

Anonymous said...

Reminded me of one of my favourite movies: "The harder they come", the harder they fall, you will succeed at last.

A prompt which indeed followed me for a while, thank you for that. Please have a good new week.

daily athens

ܔܢܜܔKrAzY KoMpLeX KiTtEn(๏̯͡๏) : said...

wow...its soo beautifull...a truth said soo beautifully..i love it.. :)....

Marinela Reka said...

True talk....Loved it , really nicely written.
Short Poems

Snow White said...

Hi friends,
Thanks a lot for stopping by :)thanks for comments too :)

Dreamy Remy said...

so nice