Sunday, October 10, 2010

Lonely




Wave of the sea
That is little me
Cool breeze, she
Is dear friend
When we play
Even lonely moon
Becomes jealous

Invite her do we
Play along with us
Then stars envy
Make a new fuss
Night flies quickly
Convince all to play
But white moon
Just walks away

We're left alone
The game has ended
Which never began!!





8 comments:

razzamadazzle said...

Very fascinating. I love this celestial game with loneliness.

Teresa

Harshad mehta said...

Damn that moon! Why can't it stay for longer?

beautiful.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

I love the idea of the moon, stars, and waves all being playmates. A very clever take on this prompt! Lovely poem.

gautami tripathy said...

Thoughtful...

dad, farther and farther away

Amity said...

so beautiful penned Snow White... :-)

i could picture the moon, the stars jealous of each other... :-)

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Fantastic Fabulous Write Up Dear :) :) Excellent Bed Time Poem For Me ;)

Patti said...

Excellent poem- I love "this is little me"-- thanks~

Snow White said...

Hi friends,
Thanks a lot for stopping by :) pls keep visiting :)