Friday, September 4, 2009

Broken Hearts

I looked for him in all faces
I felt for him in my heartbeats
I thought he was the one just for me
Alas he let me down
I don't blame him,
But he made me feel lonely,
What went wrong and when?
Both never knew...

8 comments:

Leo said...

very nice poem! it had a lot of unsaid emotions in it...

lovely read!

Vyshu said...

Very touching one thr..:)

It said volumes in few lines..

Vyshu said...

Very touching one thr..:)

It said volumes in few lines..

Being Pramoda... said...

May love bless you both..

Snow White said...

thanks a lot leo,vyshu and pramoda

angel said...

very very beautiful and heart touching dear.. i wish it never went wrong..truly madly deeply..

angel said...

u are very very talented sweetie,, :) poetry in english and kannada.. a competition in itself..:) you are the poet and the two languages are your wings.. and now i can see you flying so high.. take me along sweetie..

Snow White said...

thanks a lot for your comments angel :)u are always welcome to fly with me :)come along sweetie :)