Sunday, August 22, 2010


Only your dreams, your memories
Only you exist in shattered mirror
A mirror that is my little heart

No matter how much, what I think
Your image returns to it somehow
My heart doesn't want to accept
You're memories always in it now
Do you doubt I'll live without you?
I need time, I'll manage somehow

Just sympathy isn't enough dear
For this pensive mind now to smile
I can move forward now,that I know
Your love was untrue all the while


Hemanth Potluri said...

there is lot of pain in the words...i wish i could change the poem into this...

ur the mirror of my heart
the smile on ur face is my heart beat
the tear in eyes misplaces a beat
the happiness in ur heart doubles the love in my heart

just some words from my side to change the pain into happiness..i know i am not much of a poet now anyways i tried...and
yeah the poem was awesome..but much into pain...keep smiling..have a gr8 week ahead :)..


Anonymous said...

An entry surely able to be felt very much. Impressive writing. Please have a good start into the new week.

daily athens

SandyCarlson said...

Been there, my friend. That great leap forward is wonderful. Catching air after a situation like this is wonderful, freeing. God bless.

gautami tripathy said...

Life has to go on..

a trophy

Tumblewords: said...

Moving out of pain is always a good thing - guess we've all done this in one form or another -

Ramesh Sood said...

But then without pain.. what is life.. because then you won't know the joy of moving forward.. well written..

Do visit to bless my 100th post and also to laugh a bit.. with my haiku for LOL..

Snow White said...

Hi friends,
thanks to all :)