Sunday, January 10, 2010

Will you ?



Will you let me into your house..
will you let me into your heart..
will you dear let me into your life.,
how much long do you want me to wait ?
waiting doesn't hurt me nor make me feel bad..
as i know that its worth the cause to make me near...
what can be of such value than you in my life..
i will wait honey,to give you my love and life :)

20 comments:

ಮನಸು said...

very nice!!!

ಆನಂದ said...

Did you try the calling bell... just kidding:)

Good one!

Amity said...

"I will wait honey, till you give me your love and life"...:)

You sound in love dear...:)

very sweet and romantic poem it is!

I can relate to it, that was many years ago...:)

Snow White said...

hi manasu ,
thanks a lot dear :)pls keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi anand,
yes friend..i think i tried it , didn work for me.. ;) :)

thanks friend :) pls keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi Amity,
thanks a lot for such sweet words dear :)
I am glad if you could really relate to it :)
pls keep visiting :)

Raghu said...

bell..didn't work for you... hahaha...

nice lines.. dont't wait too much.. keep moving..

Nimmava
Raaghu

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A wonderful poem that touched my heart. The message came across and it was such a pleasure to read.

Yvonne.

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Fabulous Touching Lines Dear :) :) Could Feel The Way You Are Missing Your Loved One ;) Take Care. Belated New Year Wishes :) :)

Snow White said...

Hi Raghu,
thanks a lot for your comments friend :) pls keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi Yvonne,
thanks a lot dear for stopping by :)thanks for comments too :)pls keep visiting dear :)

Snow White said...

hi Sahana,
Happy new year to you too dear :)glad you liked it dear :)
pls keep visiting :)

完蛋 said...

愛,拆開來是心和受兩個字。用心去接受對方的一切,用心去愛對方的所有。.........................

Snow White said...

完蛋 ,
thanks :)

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

the best part is that you are ready to wait :)

Snow White said...

hi pankhuri,
yes dear thats true..thanks for stopping by..pls keep visiting :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

so nice words :)..

urs..hemu..

Snow White said...

hi hemu,
thanks friend :) keep visiting :)

SandyCarlson said...

Beautifully, tenderly said, my friend.

Snow White said...

hi SandyCarlson,
thanks a lot for stopping by and for such sweet comments dear..pls keep visiting :)