Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Departed




What did I do, that you had to depart?
Wasn't I with you, each moment from the start?
You were not with me, in my little pain,
When I tried to talk, my voice went in vain,
All fault was yours, but I got hurt again.
What did I do, that you had to depart?
What did I do, that you had to depart?

20 comments:

Leo said...

wow.. this was very nice and heartfelt Suma.. well said! :)

Tumblewords: said...

Emotion well portrayed!

Meow said...

Very emotional this one is

Kathiesbirds said...

Ah, the emotional angst of teen love. That's what this poem makes me think of. The repitition at the end drives home the sorrow and sadness.

Loch Rob said...

Not knowing what causes someone to leave always emotional. Is fault so one sided and easy to understand the why? I believe if it is not meant to be, it is not meant to be. Others will follow for those who have faith.

Creativity!! said...

Emotional Feeling Very Well Depicted :) :)

Snow White said...

hi vinay,
thanks a lot friend :)ur words mean a lot to me :)keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi tumblewords,
a hearty welcome to my blog madam:)thanks a lot for such nice comments..please keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi meow,
Thanks a lot dear :)

Snow White said...

hi kathiesbirds,
welcome to my blog madam :)
your words are really true :)thanks a lot for your comments..please keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi Loch Rob,
welcome to my blog sir :)not knowing why they left us hurts a lot...thanks a lot for commenting..please keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi sahana,
Thanks a lot dear :)

SandyCarlson said...

These unanswered questions can be haunting.

Jukota said...

Sad. Pain-filled. But this stems growth, time heals and then you know you didn't do anything wrong.

Hemanth Potluri said...

its emotional a little pain in the words...but u expressed the feel beautifully...

urs..hemu..

ܔܢܜܔKrAzY KoMpLeX KiTtEn(๏̯͡๏) : said...

a really painful yet wonderful poem...!!!

Snow White said...

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Snow White said...

hi Jukota,
welcome to my blog madam :)very true words madam..time heals everything..thanks for comments :)
keep visiting :)

Snow White said...

hi hemu,
thanks for comments friend :)

Snow White said...

hi kitten,
glad to see you after so many days :)thanks a lot dear :)