Your words hit hard,
Silence, push to dark.
Here I stand alone,
Trembling with fear;
Not even my heart,
I feel is to me near.
All around me I hear,
Strange sounds such;
Inside me, just pain,
Your words hurt much.
No one to help here,
Lonely this place seems;
Lead me to that place,
To sunshine and peace.
12 comments:
quite beautifully written! :)
there is lot of pain in the words suma..i wish only the pain lost with some lovely words...i will try to rewrite ur post in a diff way...just a try :)..will let u know when i am done :)..
ur words are good but more pain reflected...
urs..hemu..
Beautiful presentation of pain. May the sun dissipate clouds and shine on you every day!
beautiful lines
Raaghu
Lovely drawing and the poem fits it so well.
sad but wonderfully expressed dear!
we always wish better things in life....:)
i do, too!
Surely the sunshine will bring peace. Nice poem.
love how it seems to end in hope! well written~
Peace will come indeed :)
for the time being you can do the tag I left you on my blog :)
cheers!
Beautiful :) :)
Hi friends,
thanks a ton to all of you for stopping by and commenting :) pls keep visiting :)
hi friends,
I am not able to visit your blogs frequently as i am held up in some work..
Will surely try and visit ur blogs..sorry..
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