Sunday, March 14, 2010

Murmur



The leaves murmur when there is a strong breeze,
heart unknowingly murmurs when someone hurts it,
murmuring leaves stop the sound when the wind moves away,
but the heart continues its murmur till the other heart understands it..

30 comments:

Loch Rob said...

Nice visual images in your poem. Quiet, subtle, soothing verse.

SandyCarlson said...

The murmur becomes the echo that takes the shape of life itself.

Leo said...

that last line is just soooo true Suma! :)

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Fantastic True Lines Suma :) :)

mia said...

pretty...ode to the sensitive heart.

Creativity!! said...

Suma Dear, If U Don't Mind, Can I Link This Post In My Blog ??

Snow White said...

hi Sahana,
yes dear ofcourse :) :)

mothersparrow said...

My first visit to your blog, glad I got a chance to stop by.

Rob said...

Enjoyed this considerably and the photo is wonderful – thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse

Maggie said...

A very sweet heartbeat. I enjoyed your poem.

Stan Ski said...

We all need a little understanding at times.

☆Tharangni☆ said...

awww!! that is really sweeet and niceee!!! :)

anupama said...

Dear Suma,
Good Evening!
On the eve of the wonderful New Year,
When you will be busy helping Amma,
When the cuckoo is getting ready,
To welcome tomorrow morning,
Forget the heart aches,dear!
The lines are so touching,
And I can relate so well.
But now grab the opportunity,
To be happy and cheerful!
Wishing you a Marvellous Ugadi,
And May Your Dreams Come True!
Sasneham,
Anu

Mojo said...

beautifully put. that last line is a poem unto itself.

PinkZz said...

lovely !

its tru !
we jus need d other heart 2 understn us ! :)

adreamygal said...

So vy true !! n lovely written ! the closing lines are so very true !! we always yearn others to understnd us !

Amity said...

Wow...superbly written dear... :)

Continue, keep on sharing beautiful murmurs of yours heart!!!

Good morning.... :)

Tammie Lee said...

I have felt and heard these murmurs. Wonderful poem.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Yes, that last line was especially powerful...and the photo is stunning! Beautiful words.

Tumblewords: said...

I, too, can feel those murmurs. Nicely written, fascinating photo!

Hemanth Potluri said...

just one word "awesome".....i will link this up in my next post :)..

urs..hemu..

Snow White said...

hi hemu,
u can always link up :)take care :)thanks a lot for such sweet words :)

KParthasarathi said...

Very nicely written.I liked it

Creativity!! said...

Dear, I Linked Your Post In My Blog :) :) Have A Look :) :)

Aayushi Mehta said...

Indeed, there are always such murmurs in our hearts! lovely!

roshwrites said...

Nice one... lovely :)

gabrielle said...

beautiful murmurs carried from heart to waiting heart.

Snow White said...

hi friends,
thanks a lot to everyone for such sweet comments :) pls keep visiting :) have a great week ahead :)

玉鳳 said...

A truly happy person is one who can enjoy the scenery on a detour..............................................

Snow White said...

i agree with ur words :)thanks for stopping by :)