When we are unaware
We try to learn
When we lose hopes
We try to regain
When we gift some pain
We try to console
When we are happy
We express it whole
We try to smoothen
When life turns rough
We try and try more
We can't try enough
Life is long journey
It never stops moving
But it ceases to grow
When we stop trying
10 comments:
awesome poem :D
and the last 4 lines.. they say it all :D
the perfect end :)
So well put in words responses to different situations in life. And yes life goes on presenting new situation.
Is it not possible to respond to situation without getting involved emotionally?
Yes, when we stop trying, that's the time we cease to grow...so best is, as long as there is a 'thin thread of hope', let's keep trying... :)
Amazing poem Snow White! :)
Thanks for the prompt. I loved reading this!
bring on the cawing
Loved that! SO true, isn't it?! Thanks for the great prompt~
Reminded me of one of my favourite movies: "The harder they come", the harder they fall, you will succeed at last.
A prompt which indeed followed me for a while, thank you for that. Please have a good new week.
daily athens
wow...its soo beautifull...a truth said soo beautifully..i love it.. :)....
True talk....Loved it , really nicely written.
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Thanks a lot for stopping by :)thanks for comments too :)
so nice
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