You
Silver lining
In my cloud of life..
You
Ray of hope
In my gloomy days..
You
The rainbow
In my colorless life..
You
My teacher
Of life's many hues..
You
Who taught me
Affection, care, happiness..
Fights, sadness, disappointment..
You
Left me one day..
I realised that you taught me
About all colors of life.
You forgot just one color..
Emptiness
10 comments:
So good, SW. And the finale'?
Yes, and the emptiness lesson was a hard one.
Thank you very much for the prompt. I enjoyed a lot working with it.
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Wonderful work. Thank you for this weeks prompt too.
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Beautiful Fantastic Fabulous Write Up!!!!!!! You Have Very Well Said, About The Two Different Situations, One Is The Togetherness & Another One Is The When The Togetherness Is No More, What will The Very Next Stage?? Emptiness!!!!!!!!
wish you never learn of that color !! amazingly sweet poem :)
you
left an impression
with words of life..
you
wrote the words
with every aspect of life :)..
nicely done buddy :)..
urs..hemu..
It might as well be a chance to be discovered, as "emptiness" provides so much life, as doors, windows, glasses and alike proof, making it only usable due to it.
Amazing detail on the drawing ! Please have a good start into the new week. This prompt has been one of the most felt ones.
daily athens
the idea of emptiness as a color astounds me.... lost and found
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Know the feeling....Such moments can lead to changes that lead to better places. God bless.
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