The leaves murmur when there is a strong breeze,
heart unknowingly murmurs when someone hurts it,
murmuring leaves stop the sound when the wind moves away,
but the heart continues its murmur till the other heart understands it..
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5 months ago
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Nice visual images in your poem. Quiet, subtle, soothing verse.
The murmur becomes the echo that takes the shape of life itself.
that last line is just soooo true Suma! :)
Beautiful Fantastic True Lines Suma :) :)
pretty...ode to the sensitive heart.
Suma Dear, If U Don't Mind, Can I Link This Post In My Blog ??
hi Sahana,
yes dear ofcourse :) :)
My first visit to your blog, glad I got a chance to stop by.
Enjoyed this considerably and the photo is wonderful – thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse
A very sweet heartbeat. I enjoyed your poem.
We all need a little understanding at times.
awww!! that is really sweeet and niceee!!! :)
Dear Suma,
Good Evening!
On the eve of the wonderful New Year,
When you will be busy helping Amma,
When the cuckoo is getting ready,
To welcome tomorrow morning,
Forget the heart aches,dear!
The lines are so touching,
And I can relate so well.
But now grab the opportunity,
To be happy and cheerful!
Wishing you a Marvellous Ugadi,
And May Your Dreams Come True!
Sasneham,
Anu
beautifully put. that last line is a poem unto itself.
lovely !
its tru !
we jus need d other heart 2 understn us ! :)
So vy true !! n lovely written ! the closing lines are so very true !! we always yearn others to understnd us !
Wow...superbly written dear... :)
Continue, keep on sharing beautiful murmurs of yours heart!!!
Good morning.... :)
I have felt and heard these murmurs. Wonderful poem.
Yes, that last line was especially powerful...and the photo is stunning! Beautiful words.
I, too, can feel those murmurs. Nicely written, fascinating photo!
just one word "awesome".....i will link this up in my next post :)..
urs..hemu..
hi hemu,
u can always link up :)take care :)thanks a lot for such sweet words :)
Very nicely written.I liked it
Dear, I Linked Your Post In My Blog :) :) Have A Look :) :)
Indeed, there are always such murmurs in our hearts! lovely!
Nice one... lovely :)
beautiful murmurs carried from heart to waiting heart.
hi friends,
thanks a lot to everyone for such sweet comments :) pls keep visiting :) have a great week ahead :)
i agree with ur words :)thanks for stopping by :)
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