Shall I be born again for you dear?
Shall I be born as the joy in your success?
Or the smile when you are by glory blessed?
Shall I be reborn as the cool breeze around you?
Tell me friend, what shall I be when I'm reborn?
I shall for sure, as your friend, your life adorn...
Friend, reincarnate I shall in your life again!!
34 comments:
be the same friend for us :)...those lines were nice...liked it..and want to ask the same to all my friends..
urs..hemu..
the same gal as u r today, but i shuld kno wyou better by being together..:)
Nice one re..
wow...to whom are you dedicating this beautiful and inspiring poem of yours?
if i am now your friend, i would still want you to be reborn as snow white or like the real snow white!
:)
Snow White,
please add me up in your blog list, thanks...;)
Very romantic and poetic piece to go along with excellent artwork.
I like how you posed the first part of your poem as a question - as for some - reincarnation is so questionable! Nice job!
hi hemu...
thanks a lot friend :)will be the same friend to all of you:)
hi prams,
sure dear..will be the same gal and will make you know be better..best :)
hi amity,
You are surely my friend dear..i will be born as ur friend again.. :)I have added u on my list dear :) thanks for support and comments :)
I am dedicating it too all my friends :)
hi LochRob,
thanks a lot for such good comments sir :)glad u like it..please keep visiting :)
hi Jukota,
Thanks a lot madam :)glad you liked it.. :)please keep visiting :)
Very endearing, and filled with love. Beautifully done!
very lovely thoughts! :)
written beautifully da!
well said!
hi sweetest in the gale,
welcome to my blog dear :)thanks a lot for comments :)please keep visiting :)
hi vinay,
thanks a lot friend :) :)u comments mean to me a lot :)
It is an honor to decorate a friend's life.
Very interesting thought to be born again into another's life. Very nice!
hi SandyCarlson,
thanks a lot for comments :)ur words are really true :)
hi MichealO,
welcome to my blog sir,thanks a lot for comments :)
Beautiful love.
Lovely. It reminds me of Edna St Vincent's work. Have you ever read her wonderful poems?
love, Melanie
Like it!
time and time again
hi tumblewords,
thanks a lot for comments :)
Cassiopeia Rises,
thanks a lot for comments :)
wil surely read it friend :)
hi gautami,
thanks a lot for comments :)
Friendship renewing itself in the most intimate and selfless ways.
Lovely poem!
it is as if you attached your breath to someone else's life...beautifully spoken..
hi gabrielle,
thanks a lot for comments :)keep visiting :)
hi pieceofpie,
thanks a lot for comments :)keep visiting :)
I dont have words to express myself !
hi pankuri,
thanks a lot :) :)
Wow, So Beautiful Lines Dear :) :)
hi sahana,
thanks a lot dear :)
thanks to leo for his help :) :)
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